The Day The Cowboy Met His Match

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by PeaceAndLove311, Feb 3, 2005.

  1. PeaceAndLove311

    PeaceAndLove311 Member

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    Dusty was the wind
    In this City of Sin
    As The Cowboy moseyed through.
    He kept his hat low
    But his eyes did glow
    For gold, and adventure too.

    "Turn around, stranger."
    Said the town's Lone Ranger.
    The Cowboy turned and tipped his hat.
    "Now we've seen your kind,
    And I've got half a mind
    To draw, you son of a rat."

    The Cowboy blew smoke
    And easily spoke
    The words for a dead man's ears
    "I never killed a man
    Without shaking his hand."
    Lone Ranger thought of his years.

    "I respect that, kid,
    And I hate to get rid
    Of such a polite soul.
    So turn back around.
    Get out of this town."
    The Cowboy's eyes were coal.

    His soft hand stuck out
    And The Director shouts
    "CUUUUUUUUUUUT!
    You're not rough enough.
    You're fired, get your stuff."
    With that, The Cowboy was canned.
     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Nice twist, but it's kind of a letdown. I was hoping for the showdown. You had set the tone so well for it too. I like a poem that tells a story if it's done well. But anyways, I did like it. Good structure to it, I liked the rhyme scheme.
     
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