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Song of a Ghost

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Luke (crazy horse), Jan 14, 2005.

  1. Luke (crazy horse)

    Luke (crazy horse) Member

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    These are the lyrics to a song I wrote. It's not a poem but I wasn't sure where else to post it....I'd love some comments, good or bad. Thank you!

    I wanna' see a ghost so I can ask her what it's like to float
    She was asked to meet me in my little boat
    To teach me how to walk on the water
    I waited in the dark but I never saw her

    Thanks for letting me fall into the icy water
    Instead of meeting me you haunt with your dead friends
    As I look at the sky there's no sign of her
    The only ghost I see is the full moon

    I remember when I saw her dancing in the fields
    When I heard her sing I knew she was real
    I asked her to meet me and pointed to the sea
    My spine shivered when she smiled at me
     
    Luke (crazy horse), Jan 14, 2005
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