In My Mind... - And Yours

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  1. bird_migration

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    "Let me introduce myself", I am telling my audience, which exists of you
    "my name is Bert Mig and I will be your narrator for the duration of this story."

    I pause so you can think about what I just said.

    "Let me take you on an amazing journey which will take both you and me to places we might never have been to before.
    No no, not physical places, just places we will create together in our mind.
    Since this is an interactive story, I will need to stop my narration here and let you decide where our story will take us. I will give you two options."

    I pause again, thinking about what options I shall give my reader. Ofcourse I can give the same options I gave the previous reader, but I decide I will give you different options. Just to make you feel special.

    "Okay, option 1: to the end of the universe, in other words I will take you to the moment just after the big bang.
    Option 2: Easter Island."

    Here I stop with my narrative and ask you, my valued reader, to make your choice. Also I will let you comment on my story thus far.
     
  2. Fairlight

    Fairlight Banned

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    I will take Easter Island.I await with bated breath...
     
  3. roamy

    roamy Senior Member

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    i'll take option 3, and not be limited ta options when minds are free ta roam wherever they want to.
     
  4. Fairlight

    Fairlight Banned

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    I cannot deal with more than one option at a time...
     
  5. roamy

    roamy Senior Member

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    singular options,interesting theory.
     
  6. Fairlight

    Fairlight Banned

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    Interesting theory - does it work in practice?
     
  7. roamy

    roamy Senior Member

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    no, i don't think so.cos an option is a choice and if ya havta choose your not free. what dya think yourself ?
     
  8. Fairlight

    Fairlight Banned

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    I think I DON'T HAVE MUCH FREEDOM.iN FACT i KNOW FOR A FACT.
     
  9. roamy

    roamy Senior Member

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    if you know for a fact! how come ya think ?
     
  10. gdpoet

    gdpoet Guest

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    i would take option one
     
  11. Lodog

    Lodog Senior Member

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    I choose Easter Isle and if one of those giant heads fall on me I'm book marking the original post and choosing end of the universe.
     
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