the fall of man

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by andmoreagain72, Oct 29, 2012.

  1. andmoreagain72

    andmoreagain72 Member

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    the fall of man
    the guns of war
    the ugly creatures
    watch them brawl

    over lost futures that they dreamed
    grasped easily on movie screens
    we go outside and light a flame
    the ending shall always feel the same

    it's not for me
    it's not for you
    it's blood red poison
    black and blue

    the sound of raindrops curtain fall
    the memory won't die at all
    the haunted sleep shall see to this
    I bow my head and cease my fit
     
  2. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    this had a good flow of thought, easy read. I liked the images and the tone you set.
     
  3. tcore108

    tcore108 Member

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    Uhh, at least it's not about sex. Like every other forum post...
     
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