Love is Lost

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by jahendie, Dec 22, 2004.

  1. jahendie

    jahendie Member

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    Love is lost Through a bottle
    Your home for the evening thats why we fiddle
    An expostion is avoided for a single day
    You mind is tearing you every single way

    Your friends think every thing's alright
    They don't see what goes on at night
    The love we built together
    Will always faint and seether

    But I won't nurture this anymore
    You'd be a tad better gone
    I'm going to rapture your core
    A knife in your back makes me a con

    But Instead of you i'll Have the dawn




    (this isn't me only from me)
     
  2. kidder

    kidder Member

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    Top marks for original words! 'Seether' is now part of a much larger domain! And why shouldn't we too have the right to add to the lexicon?
     
  3. spacevein

    spacevein Member

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    Ive built a barrier around myself.Ive never admitted i was lost.I havent lived with with my heart just my surroundings.I lost my favorite person.The one I Followed.She was my leader.So its opend my eyes and now im ready to reach out for help.
     
  4. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    great words ,what has to be said will be written...


    how to hide ,to solve all to find yourself
    to be honest ,
    and to gather life afterwards
    thats the path..........


    love n peace from saff

    be whole for you only have yourself ,,,
    your head your heart your path..
     

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