Well I've created a home - All Important

A window once opened
And I felt scared
My flesh quivered
Thoroughly impaired

A window once opened
Excited, naive, trembling smile
A girl with tattood, trembling lips
It had been awhile

A window once opened
Further than before
I pushed the looking glass beyond
Well beyond "Well this is more."

A window once opened
To a painted face
In a tired town
In a pallid place

A coloured door
In a burned out place
Faded colour
On a tired face

So much more
beautiful than before
Was a welcome face
Beyond a rusted door

Lifted was a spirit and smile
I realised I hadn't walked a mile
To a coloured face nor a burned out place
I left my place for awhile.

With Peace, Love, Sentimentality, sincerity, and utmost respect. I thank My Hipforums for introducing me to the love of my life, and giving me a reason to love, reason, write and create. A window in a blackened home, I thank Hipforums, and Hipforums alone.

A lonely face will never smile,
A severed hand will never feel.
A lonely man will walk miles, and miles,
An honest heart will never steal.

Thank you to everyone on my friends list, every creator and monitor of this site. I hope I've thanked every one. And to everyone, a good night.

Lunarverse

 

How nice of you to join us.. We was just talking about windows..

 

Great poetry. I nearly jizzed.

 

I Read It Twice And Never Even Cracked A Semi....

Does The Fault Lie With The Poet Or Moi....??



Cheers Glen.

 

Hi Lunar! Good to see you :-D

 

if had you not mentioned about hip forum, lost was me