Heartbreak III (End)

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Mr. Bleak, Aug 16, 2012.

  1. Mr. Bleak

    Mr. Bleak Member

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    All that's left,
    Memories condensed to a single thought,
    Out of the turmoil, A reoccurring idea,
    One of indifference, apathy
    My salvation and respite

    A soft chuckle as I see you,
    Plump babies on a plump arm,
    His eyes, your smile,
    You've dimmed, fading
    Your choice and fate

    Everything we ever were,
    A drop upon the oceans of my mind,
    Amidst that chaos, A forgotten lyric
    Love diluted, nothing
    My emptiness and freedom
     
  2. rak

    rak Senior Member

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    I like the idea of memory being condenced to a single thought. It reminds me of a part of Men in Black where one of the characters says that when people die all of their life's experiences run through their mind really quickly and freeze your last impression. I guess that would be a moment in which all your life experiences are squeezed into one final thought and impression.
     
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