I Hate Seattle - a love story

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by *electrica*, Dec 16, 2004.

  1. *electrica*

    *electrica* Member

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    Isn't Love Story an incredible movie?

    You'll all have to trust me on this one. It may be silly, but it is NOT sad or angry. Not one bit. It's about falling in love only to have that person move to another country.

    I Hate Seattle

    I am sitting in a plane
    Rising and falling
    With no end in sight
    Each dip sends me tears
    Each rise gives me hope
    I'm stuck here forever
    You're locked in my brain

    I can't get myself past
    No one else is worthy
    But neither are you
    You're a crank, a pain
    Incapable of love
    You've no interest in me
    I'll forever be last

    But I love you the same
    I still wait up for you
    I've run you to death
    You are my perfection
    As I am your perfection
    I'll wait up for you forever
    Because I'm just that lame :p
     
  2. Templedragon

    Templedragon Peace through Spirit

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    awe man, I love Seattle. Sowwy about your heart.

    Peace, Vivian from Seattle
     
  3. *electrica*

    *electrica* Member

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    I've never seen Seattle so I don't know if I hate it. I'm going there for christmas to purposely rebreak my heart with the guy I wrote about. I'm told it's a very nice city, so we shall see.
     
  4. YankNBurn

    YankNBurn Owner

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    Well the last time I was there in 1997 it was pretty nice minus the Ranier District. Down by the piers is wonderful, lots of colorful life and things to do.
     
  5. Templedragon

    Templedragon Peace through Spirit

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    You would be hard pressed to find a city more friendly to hippies, in the United States. We have the largest hempfest in the world (see my link below), are among the most libreral voting districts anywhere, and the city is green both politically and literally.

    The neighborhood I live in, North Seattle is rife with hippies.
    peace, V-
    .[/QUOTE]
     
  6. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Didn't find this angry or sad, rather hopeful actually. Really liked the middle stanza, but the ending, the last line was a total downer :(
    [Because I'm just that lame :p]
    This made me feel, like I've just wasted my time...:(
     
  7. monosphere

    monosphere Holly's Hubby

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    LOL I live in the Rainier Beach neighborhood. Yeah, it gets a little weird in this area.
     
  8. monosphere

    monosphere Holly's Hubby

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    [/QUOTE]
    I dunno. Plenty of friendly cities in Northern Cali. Eugene OR isn't bad either. Between Seattle, Olympia, and Bellingham, you have most of the hippy population of Washington.

    And I do have to agree with your second comment. Our Hempfest kicks ass!! Haven't been to a better one yet.
     
  9. Dude111

    Dude111 An Awesome Dude

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    Very nice poem...Im sorry someone fell in love w/someone and they moved away...
     

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