been a while since I've touched canvas.. a little practice. Mainly need patience with myself when painting. I'll try next time.
i think the composition is good, but i don't like the palette. perhaps develop the background some more before moving to the forms you have in the foreground? maybe even emphasize the blue form in the top-right corner some more. i think that would not only give the piece a better sense of unity, but also serve as an effective focal point. i dig the direction you're headed, though.
