On Solid Ground

Discussion in 'Writers Forum' started by roamy, Feb 13, 2012.

  1. roamy

    roamy Senior Member

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    In the Darkest pit i sat
    and the darkness enveloped me
    Terrified of the Monsters i could not see
    Lurking in the darkness

    For years i sat
    For years they Pounced
    I screamed inside
    though Outwardly i showed no fear

    I don't scream Inwardly anymore
    I scream Outwardly
    get to F**k
    the Games Over !

    Going to the top of the pit
    I slide the lid across
    and look Inside
    I watch them now

    As They run and disperse
    Dissolving into the walls of the pit
    where I Once shivered

    The odd monster still rears it's ugly head
    from time to time
    But they don't hang round
    for long anymore

    How could i ever have feared such Cowards ?
    I'm still here
    they've already Gone !

    Today i stand
    at the top of the pit
    I stand in Glory
    Without fear

    Up here
    There is a blinding Light
    And the Light
    Terrifies them !..
     
  2. TAZER-69

    TAZER-69 Listen To Your Heart! Lifetime Supporter

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    Wow...... Awesome
     
  3. roamy

    roamy Senior Member

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    thanks taz :)
     
  4. roamy

    roamy Senior Member

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    In memory and respect for all my fellow country people who were murdered on Bloody Easter Sunday 1972. R.I.P.

    Mother Ireland

    Theres a ship out on the ocean
    Theres a Storm across the Sea
    Soon i will return My Love
    Should these Brittish set me Free!
    but should i not return My love
    United there with thee !
    Do not be ashamed
    For You
    I died with Dignity !

    Oh Ireland
    Mother Ireland
    Be my Queen
    I'll be your Crown!
    And no matter how hard they might try
    They will Never! bring Us down
    Though They have ravished at Your Beauty
    An They have Plundered at Your feet
    To hell with ye Brittish Army
    Ye will Never us Defeat!

    The Squad are on their way now
    As the Ship goes Sailing by
    To take me to the Courtyard
    To shoot me "til I Die
    But i Won't Hang My head in shame
    I'll just Proudly March on through !
    But for You Ireland
    Mother Ireland
    Yes!

    I'll still Shed a Tear or two...
     
  5. dhflixo

    dhflixo Guest

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    very nice topic....
     
  6. roamy

    roamy Senior Member

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    nice topic ? care to elaborate ?
     
  7. Fairlight

    Fairlight Banned

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    Graet poem Roamy. defiant!
     
  8. roamy

    roamy Senior Member

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    thanks fairlight :)
     
  9. roamy

    roamy Senior Member

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    Verses

    verses
    verses
    verses

    Flowing from our Souls

    Knowledge
    knowledge

    No control!

    The pen takes over

    Another poem...:rolleyes:
     
  10. TheBloodyDreamsSeries

    TheBloodyDreamsSeries Member

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    its sounds so natural
     
  11. jimmyjoe1

    jimmyjoe1 toker Lifetime Supporter

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    Great poem roamy. looking forward to the next poem. the first poem was cool too..
     
  12. s_coy2005

    s_coy2005 Member

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    awesome love your poems
     
  13. inkgal8290

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    yeah they are very good.
     
  14. roamy

    roamy Senior Member

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    thanks guys :daisy:
     
  15. weeattoes

    weeattoes what will be, will be

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    love your poems roamy!
     
  16. roamy

    roamy Senior Member

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    thanks toes:daisy:
     
  17. roamy

    roamy Senior Member

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    Zone X

    What zone is this he'd ask
    if there was somebody to ask !
    But this was a vacant zone

    With Nobody home !

    A vacant zone
    In an immense Universe
    A vacant zone










    Within Himself !

    What was missing ?

    Was it him ?
    Or something else ?

    Confused at the crossroads he stood awaiting a sign

    Where to next ?

    Emotionally Immobile
    The pain Nothingness
    threathening to remove him from the face of the Earth


    Fear !

    And Nobodys home


    At Zone X..........................
     
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