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Indistinguishable Gibberish *Obscene*

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by StpLSD25, Apr 23, 2012.

  1. StpLSD25

    StpLSD25 Senior Member

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    have I forgotten the smallest detail?
    Of what being my soul mate would therein entail?
    "Just release your anger," I heard her say;
    It was obvious to me, she likes it that way.

    I hope they occupy Wall Street forever,
    I'm just getting high, and cheering them on.
    Please love, forget me never;
    my moment's here, I must be gone.

    The world is just one big theater,
    with millions of different characters;
    I play an active part talking to mirrors,
    and singing with my back turned.

    As I stood alone for her neglect,
    her thoughts went astray and straight, to sex.
    She got a little rough and also abusive.
    I was on drugs, feeling very illusive.

    But she wasted no time, distracting my mind,
    as she dropped onto the bed.
    "Put it inside, please, fuck me dry,"
    is exactly what she said.

    "No thanks," I replied,
    "there's a circle in my head,
    I'm still quite occupied,
    Occupying Wall street instead.
     
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  3. StpLSD25

    StpLSD25 Senior Member

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    :) I take that as a compliment, or as a "What the hell is going on in this guys head."
    Lol but much obliged.
     
  4. skyfire

    skyfire Member

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    :) a compliment, I like your flow
     
  5. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    This is fucking fabulous!
     
  6. StpLSD25

    StpLSD25 Senior Member

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    Thank you guys! I have alot of poems that are sort of borderline. I'm glad to see that you two like it because I'm very critical on my own poetry. Thank you!!
     
  7. ClassicRockGirl

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    Haha, that was awesome. x) Dirty poetry is hot. :D
     
  8. Manservant Hecubus

    Manservant Hecubus Master of Funk and Evil

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    I'm sorta disappointed by the title.
    Every word is comprehensible!!!
     
  9. StpLSD25

    StpLSD25 Senior Member

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    Lol thanks classic rock girl. And sorry Hecubus, I'll try my best to be less comprehensible in the poetry to come.
     
  10. ClassicRockGirl

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    You're welcome. x)
     
  11. Dancing til Dawn

    Dancing til Dawn Senior Member

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    Haha love it, brilliant twist! :2thumbsup:
     
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  13. StpLSD25

    StpLSD25 Senior Member

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    Thanks Gin and Dawn!!
     
  14. BohemianOddity

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    I like your style. It's like a carelessness in something careful... and theres a loss of focus there which I can appreciate because I feel A.D. at times :p
     
  15. StpLSD25

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    Lol thank you Bohemian Oddity!!
     
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