I've written quite a few but for now I'm just gonna post 2. I wrote them both one night I couldn't sleep, one I wrote about Jimmy Page :guitarist: ha ha. She caresses a new lover's cheek With a hand that used to be mine Back during a more innocent time Before confessions and secrets sent her adrift Like a wayward leaf Brown like her eyes that are no longer willing to meet mine We can never be the same And I only have myself to blame And I only have myself to blame. Rockstar I go back through a time machine To a time where I wasn't even yet a thought Disco Vietnam Are you going to San Francisco? A darkened stadium Raven haired alabaster sex god Ten lithe fingers Sensually caressing the body My body Of a guitar Bringing it to screeching fits of ecstasy When your fingers reach an exotic vacation spot That has yet to be explored
nightime is a good time for writing may.less distractions. good poem. i really like that line"Like a wayward leaf " welldone! keep writing.
Nice ode to master Page . I saw him when he was with the Firm . His talent is top notch . I highly recommend getting and reading the book hammer of the gods . A great read into the history and time of one of the greatest bands ever .
You are so lucky to have seen him, I hope to see him too eventually on or off the stage. I'll take either. Hopefully more poetry to come :sunny:
Promise you'll always be truthful Promise you'll always be loyal Promise you'll always be faithful Promise you'll treat me like I'm royal Even if we are poor We'll have many children maybe six, maybe five, maybe four Promise you'll be there from the beggining Promise you'll be there to the end Promises, promises, promises To you, all the love in my heart i'll send. I go day by day invisible except for moments of ridicule I know that being caring makes me the fool because no cares if i go life will continue to flow as if i never even existed You told me a lie You said you would'nt do anything To make me cry But you did it twice You are not As nice As I thought you were. You told me a lie You said you would tell me If something gave you a bother But you you did not I text and I called But your voicemail was all I got You were not nice You treated me worse than a stranger Your heart was as cold as ice...
i can feel your pain that poem may.but its good you are expressing it. an you did it with with poetic brillance! we are lucky to have poetry to be able to express things with.welldone! may.hugs :grouphug:
