I can't stop writing...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by StoneyCrustyBabe, Dec 15, 2004.

  1. StoneyCrustyBabe

    StoneyCrustyBabe Member

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    Surfing

    Sometimes between
    A realization and consequence
    It gets confused
    Muddy
    Drift
    I drift
    Roll up on a wave
    Then gently submerge
    Just to roll up another wave

    Wise Men

    Old crusty dude
    Smoking a pipe
    Riding his bike
    Hauling ass
    Down 5th Avenue
    I find youth
    Seeing
    Old crusty dudes
    Riding bicycles
    While otherwise oddball
    Manuevers are acted out

    Untitled

    Dreamer girl
    How could you
    Possibly know that
    You do enough good
    Karma cannot be played
    Like a game.

    Be a being of love and light
    Is it so hard?

    Yes I know the same old rebuttal
    You can't help but be drawn
    To the dark
    It's like the nightmares
    Of a childhood
    You rarely think about anymore
    In which you (the protagonist
    in this cinematic process
    of innocent ego)
    Try vigorously to run
    From demons, monsters, and witches
    Just to find the very ground
    Begin to suck your feet in.

    Mostly at this point
    The dreamer girl wakes up
    But you, naive woman child
    Are mesmerized
    And so allow yourself to be drawn in.

    Exhilirating, isn't it?
    That rush of knowing
    Your Heart/Angel is
    Blasting it sirens at you
    Full volume,
    And choose to instead
    Pay attention to the
    Devil/Ego whispering
    Sweet little secrets in your ear.


    And finally my first haiku:

    I play here in fields
    Meant for the sly star children
    Wandering a dream
     
  2. kidder

    kidder Member

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    Keep posting those haiku. That's a great one!
     
  3. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    Wow. An anomaly has occured. I agree with kidder!

    and on untitled:

    There is a beauty in horror and a horror in beauty. And for those who have but the wit to apply the proper strategy, a transcendency, as of the manner by which the Shadow may Coalesce with the Light that projects it.

    Though how sure we can really be, that the Shadow does not project the Light....

    eMBeMLaHV! :)
     
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