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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rambleON, Jan 3, 2012.

  1. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    Porcelain boy SOLDIER

    If I never talked
    I wouldn't listen more
    Cos I'm that fresh, frozen dialog
    Of conversations unspoken
    Between contention and sulfur heat

    If I never listened
    I wouldn't listen, or be thirsty
    Because I'm a rooster quit cold turkey
    Deploy this tactic, can't you see some static ?
    Constituting emergencies on my path with
    Dynamic planning, with fast bandwidth

    I'd rotor wisdom on empire
    Broadcasting reversals over tight rope
    So, the less noise I make
    The more I communicate this:
    Body language like ghost shell
    Illumines my snake pit,
    pent up mostly, by screaming wholesale

    What is it, but is what is
    Sometimes when, on what consequences


    Don't you get it fool ?

    I'm that Porcelain boy soldier, little atlas chin
    Who Chariots a land rover, over his requiem
    Riding cursed Frankenstein monster
    First to herd Cyclops in past bad posture
    Though, you will fail to understand this,

    Because of Fair Trade Poppy
    Awful habit. Contrived little carcinogens
    Dry Skittles eaten alive by his Rabbit Friend
    Easter eggs: painted by China synthetics
    Incubated puzzles cracked concave genetics

    What ?
     
  2. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    Who changed my title and why ?
     
  3. darkus13

    darkus13 Member

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    i really love your poem. It's expressive, although abstract. Keep on writing!
     
  4. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    thanks dude, did you change my title?
     
  5. force_of_acid

    force_of_acid Member

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    Someone changed it and so the story evolves, as before and after, you know how it works.. .

    What's important for you is do you mind it...

    I probably wouldn't ever read it if it wasn't changed ... it might be good or bad .. .who knows :D..
     
  6. darkus13

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    Nope. Couldn't even if I wanted to.
     

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