We had great times while driving. Picturing you having fun,rocking out, kissing your soft lips, going over the speed limit on the free way. It all makes me smile but brings tears to my eyes. The way you looked when i first met you, Now that is a night i will never forget. Us talking about Nintendo's and other old things. That makes my tears start to flow. Wishing i had met you sooner, I think about what it would have been like. Would you have stayed?Would his mom let you pay rent? WOuld you have left anyway? But i am glad i met you because you got rid of my fears. The great times we had will come back soon. But your smile i can't wait to see. It's stuck in my head So the great times will never fade.
Really like the last stanza! One person's smile 'stuck' in another's 'head.' There's synergy there. Write on!
