Fire

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by April90, Aug 27, 2011.

  1. April90

    April90 Member

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    I used to compare myself with a fire,
    So sudden, so restless, so hard to predict -
    A definite danger from miles to admire,
    The gamut of colors one couldn't depict.

    The flame is extinguished. The reason is clear -
    I crave for love fuel and only one match.
    I'm stronger than every invisible tear
    That turns to a raindrop. I'll start from a scratch.

    I'll be a good guide for my soulmates-strangers,
    A guard for the lost and the ones of this kind,
    For anything frail I'll reveal only danger...
    However, a match is not easy to find.
     
  2. rak

    rak Senior Member

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    Add too more lines in that poem and you may have a sonnet or at leased a curtozane.
     
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