I know a traditional haiku doesn't usually take this tone. But for the feeling I wanted to convey its hypnotic rhythm just felt best, even if I am not talking about nature. ------------------ Charish gloomy days Cold wet sad windy and grey They fortify you With wet shoes and coat Ice forming in ones damp hair feel joy but not hope know your soul is real vivid as blood on fresh snow it will greet you there
Thanks. As far as I know, that line is all mine, classic Paul, but it could have been somewhere else once. I'm going to put this one here instead of making more threads since it's a haiku too ------------- Today yesterday and always I wait for you Under the willow Among fireflies on a warm June night so sweet we made a promise I wait though I know somewhere a stone bares your name yet I find you here
