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Sincerity

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by April90, Jul 12, 2011.

  1. April90

    April90 Member

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    The times of the rhyming sensations are ceased,
    It's no surprise evil love has deceased -
    My heart is a chamber with limited space,
    Indifference got all my feelings erased.

    Frail fibre is used to the memories' blade,
    My thirst for your love is about to fade,
    Deceiving myself is revealing the truth,
    The pain of desire is easy to soothe.

    Two opposite planets, two opposite spheres,
    Both ruled by denying just being sincere
    Will never be one due to different laws.
    I have to accept it the way that it goes.

    Sincerity stands for the lack of control,
    And love never even existed at all.
    So what does my poetry speak of, indeed?
    Old scars are deprived of the pleasure to bleed.
     
    April90, Jul 12, 2011
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  3. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    Rhyming is not your bread and butter. Bread and butter are your bread and butter.
     
    rambleON, Jul 12, 2011
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