Poem about me xD like, a year ago though xD

She always knew it would be okay,
She always erased yesterday,
She knew one day she'd fly away,
And throw her plaguing troubles away,
She wants to hang from a noose,
Though she knows that it would be no use,
When the brighter side's always there to seduce,
And tear her away from her ready hanging noose,
She wants to fall into the sea,
And drown forever, for eternity,
She wishes for once she could just be,
And be part of the ocean, forever free,
She needs to run away and pretend,
That misery's not round the bend,
Like icicles that always extend,
She'll never accept that it's the end.

 

Split it up into verses. The flow is alright, but I personally found it to be a little choppy in a few places.

That's just my opinion though.

 

thank you xD I always welcome constructive criticism xD Daddy is always mean about my writing though... but then what does he know?? hes obsessed with sports and knows nothing about the beauty of words... xD