cute poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by WolfLarsen, Jul 1, 2011.

  1. WolfLarsen

    WolfLarsen Member

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    Cute Poem
    Re: Change of Management
    Cooperative Committee
    Central Park Luxury Towers
    New York, NY
    Dear Sirs & Madams:
    I would like to evict a multimillionaire from Central Park Luxury Towers and live there. I've been a longshoreman or dockworker for nine years and I write poetry so I would like a beautiful view of Central Park. The rest of you millionaires & billionaires can move out as well, because I'm inviting construction workers, waitresses, & office clerks to move into all your apartments. And we're taking away all your ill-begotten wealth and giving it away to poor people, students, the disabled, homeless veterans, etc. - so now you'll all have to get a real job. Why not?
    Sincerely,
    Wolf Larsen
    P.S. McDonalds is hiring!
     
  2. Pablo

    Pablo Member

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    Good idea
     
  3. jillianlove

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    I don't know if that's really a poem, but I love the idea of living with the famous people live!
     
  4. jillianlove

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    you might want to read up on some other poems to get more inspiration.
     
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  6. rambleON

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    I don't think your disdain for society reflects welll in your writings because you are not being honest in bringing out your emotion. Do that, and we will know how you feel.

    Not a bad piece, cos I like the voice and surety of what you just proposed lol
     
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