11-5-04

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by OutdoorWoman, Dec 8, 2004.

  1. OutdoorWoman

    OutdoorWoman Member

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    its impossible to think
    when enclosed in a small ofice
    with 7 voices loudly talking
    about sports and other such unimportance
    nonsense and no work
    and i am left with noise pollution
    filling my head with uninspiring thought
    crushing me with the inability to create great work
    this friday morning
    when enclosed in a small office
    with 7 voices loudly talking
     
  2. kidder

    kidder Member

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    I think your experience is universal. Try a modern high school class. Sometimes you're not even sure who's the teacher! I like the rounding of the poem here. It mimics how hopeless such situations can be.
     
  3. OutdoorWoman

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    Thanks for the comments. Reading this poem really makes me remember the headache i had the day i wrote it. Its frustrating when that happens..
     

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