Haikus

Discussion in 'Writers Forum' started by StompingTheRoses, Apr 21, 2011.

  1. StompingTheRoses

    StompingTheRoses Guest

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    I love love love Haikus. Post your favourite ones, whether you wrote them or not. :)

    Here are some of mine:

    A key dream shattered
    Its shards digging into soles
    Thousands left wounded

    Look into the light
    Bright and blinding it hits me
    Time to say goodbye

    A golden leaf falls
    Soft carpet of bright colours
    Lies on the moist earth.

    Share!
     
  2. midgardsun

    midgardsun Senior Member

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    nice haikus, the second one has a good rhythm to it
     
  3. Meliai

    Meliai Members

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    I like them. you've inspired me to write a haiku. I've never tried to write one before.
     
  4. StompingTheRoses

    StompingTheRoses Guest

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    Thanks, glad you liked it.

    Yay, have fun! It's not too hard. :)
     
  5. midgardsun

    midgardsun Senior Member

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    at the begin it can be difficult, I also had problems with my first poems but after a while the creative flow from the unconcious gets establihed and can speed up in a way that its difficult to write fast enough. I made for example a plan to write at least 10 poems per day for one year and I did it. Then with the creative flow fully established you can produce amazing things.
     
  6. StompingTheRoses

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    How's it going? :)
     
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