Hi. Just a poem i wrote out of randomness. critique is welcomed, as I'm fairly new to poetry and I love to hear others opinions. This took me very little time, and not too much thought, so try to keep the flaming at a minimum . Thank you. Paradox Without real, there is no unreal Without bravery, there is no fear Without smile, there is no frown Without up, there is no down With out laugh, there is no scream With out pond, there is no stream With out mean, there is no nice Just one, it doesn't suffice So when you question something Remember to always think Twice-eciwT
If you put very little thought and effort into it then what is there to critique? IMO seems a bit cliche, though I'm no poet myself. Good luck
I wanted to do a little bit of research on types of poetry and such. I also wanted to get an idea of how good i am at it already, so i know what to begin learning.
Very simple, but a fun little poem. I think if you spend a little time on it, maybe you might have something pretty decent here. Keep workin' at it!
