For those who know someone addicted or are addicted

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ness33, Feb 21, 2011.

  1. ness33

    ness33 Member

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    Conversations between the breeze
    this is where I want to be
    she whispered back and forth to me
    sky illuminated
    sun set to flame
    what is all this beauty
    does it have a name
    endless miracles
    even as we sweat
    impurities deep inside
    expel all that hides

    In dark alleys
    It stole her soul
    gave her ground to dig
    a cave so deep
    “Why don’t you bury me
    I can hardly sleep.”
    “Why do you bother to stay,
    my heart has turned to clay.”

    She implied that the mask
    gave her strength
    as it only fit her face
    she claimed, “this is where I belong
    this is my resting place.”

    The truth of reality
    crumbled beneath her
    logic fell free
    and broke into debris
    inviting insanity
    from the mirror
    on the vanity
    caging the thoughts
    clustered in her mind
    devouring any beauty
    the she could find.
     
  2. lovelyxmalia

    lovelyxmalia Banana Hammock Lifetime Supporter

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    I really like this poem. Its dark but emotional. Its definitely one that can be felt rather than just read, for addicts and non-addicts alike.
     
  3. la Principessa

    la Principessa Member since '08

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    I can feel the pain in this poem...very touching.
     
  4. poeticbloodline

    poeticbloodline Guest

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    Sky illuminated
    Sun set to flame

    Loving the imagery really liked this poem
     
  5. OceanWalker

    OceanWalker Member

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    I love this. You're words are beautiful
     
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