Made new rap video

wrote a little verse and chorus line over this beat I love.

just messin around, I don't take it too seriously, its just fun.

tell me what u guys think! lol

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yKUkSF41wAY"]YouTube - Faith (Life I Live Verse)

 

Not bad at all, only thing i would recommend if you want to get better is when you take your breath.

 

Not my favorite style of beat but good flow for an amateur. Kinda feel like making on of these myself now aha.

 

thanks guys, and yeah my lung capacity sucks. usually I break up lines and record them individually so its not noticable but this vid was a real quick one so didn't care.

 

psizzle... that's what happens when you piss on a fire

 

^^ how do u think I got my name? I'm a notorious pisser.

 

Notorious P-I-S?

 

I got a rap lyric for you

Tell someone they can eat a 6 pack of dick sacks.