I Don't Have To

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ci0616, Jan 10, 2011.

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    Flakes fall gently upon us
    Her smile shines so brightly
    Amazingly, it does not melt the snow
    My fingers meet hers

    And I am entranced
    By beautiful bright blue orbs
    Which she calls her eyes
    God's handiwork, no doubt

    I am in love
    With the soft red lips
    When they kiss me like snowflakes
    With the legs which she thinks are too thick
    But I know are perfection
    With the heavenly sweet sigh
    That graces my ear
    After making love on a Saturday afternoon
    With her laughter
    A melody worthy of a Grammy

    I want to tell her
    Exactly how I feel
    But as her aqua blue eyes
    Meet mine
    I know I don’t have to
     
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    As always, critique as harshly or generously as you wish, so long as it's honest. Hope you enjoyed!
     
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