I'll Pick You Up At Eight

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ci0616, Jan 5, 2011.

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    Been busy lately, so haven't had much time to write. But, seeing as today was a slow day, I managed to bang this one out. Hope y'all like it:


    We need to go to the movies
    Because you have officially invaded my mind
    Consuming my every thought

    Because every time I close my eyes
    Soft blonde hair
    And wet red lips

    Because every time I see the ocean
    I am reminded of the sweet aqua blue of your eyes

    Because, quite frankly, my dear
    My friends are sick of my incessant chatter about you

    Because your laugh is like a melody
    That I wish to savor in my ear

    Because the short time I spend with you each day
    Makes my entire life seem mundane and unimportant

    Are you free on Saturday?
    I’ll pick you up at eight
     
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