Where Is She?

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ci0616, Nov 5, 2010.

  1. ci0616

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    Another Friday night
    Spent in the overbearing solitude of his one bedroom apartment
    Where is she?

    Her ghost sleeps peacefully in his bed
    Whilst maniacal thoughts and whiskey feed his insomnia

    Where is she?
    The city bustles three stories below
    Ordinary folk carry out their pleasant endeavors

    How could they be so happy
    When he is on his last leg
    Struggling for survival
    Struggling for meaning
    Desperately wanting anything

    Where is the girl
    Who rocked his universe
    By whispering into his ear
    Those three maddeningly beautiful words

    Where is the girl
    Who listened to records with him
    On Sunday afternoons
    Just after making love in the late morning

    Where is the devil
    Who savagely stole his heart

    The cold injustice of the world
    Quickly washes over him
     
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    Don't care if you love it or hate it. I do, however ask, that you give your 100 percent honest opinion.
     
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    i like it . its singable..
     
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    thanks for the feedback orison!
     
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