untitled, because I don't know what to call it

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by danielleinthesky, Oct 12, 2010.

  1. danielleinthesky

    danielleinthesky Member

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    reach your limbs out;
    try to achieve the knowledge.
    a pool of bountiful insights,
    bathe in it.
    become enlightened,
    know what you are,
    be conscious of your human.
    scream in emotional overflow,
    every idea pouring from the spout.
    lead others to the spring;
    share the gift of apprehension.
    draped in irresistible knowing,
    use this in your earthly life.
    keep it when you go.
    your presence leaving a trail,
    fate will have them follow,
    and an end will make it's way.

    -DL
     
  2. DiscoPhish

    DiscoPhish Member

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    very nice, i like the line "fate will have them follow"
    that would also be a good title
     
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