INSIDE MY PAPER BOAT sittin inside my paper boat rowin rowin rowin in an ocean filled with diamond dust keepin clown fish in my coat a sunken ship had passed me by 1000 leagues beneath the sea the skeleton crew is rowin rowin rowin empty sockets starin up at me the stars are lovin junkies jonesin for a cosmic fix the sky is a glittering sequin gown whiskey, coke and poison in a perfect deadly mix LOSING YOURSELF you call yourself a human i call myself a poet you say youre a functioning member of society well i say that youre a corpse and dont fucking know it you say im way to free i say hey man relax when god strikes down with mighty vengeance were both gettin the ax MEXICO everytime i cross the border oh i get older i get older everytime the sun beats down on me i grow older i grow older cant someone carry me away,take me into town push me down a well ,let me drown everytime the shaman man dances 'round my head oh i can feel the dead, i can feel the dead everytime i make my bed with auburn leaves oh i believe, i believe for every 7 nights theres 13 flourescent days before i sleep i wake instead, to incoherent dreams as i cross the river down to mexico ill set fire to the horses as they graze dancing, wild beauty all ablaze.
i dig your style. it all seems very lyrical to me, i can picture all of these as songs. edit:after a second reading, ive determined i really, really dig your style. It has a rawness to it. I especially like the last poem.
