"Parasites"

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by angel_of_hate, Sep 30, 2010.

  1. angel_of_hate

    angel_of_hate Member

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    PARASITES


    Parasites
    Leeching to each other
    Feeding off
    Contaminated words
    Spewed from
    Intolerable lips​


    Caged beasts
    Forming molested children
    Entangled in a web
    Of conformity​

    A society
    Raised on television ads
    Trampled by neighbors
    Who kill instead of love
    Where lives boundaries
    Know no limit​


    Exiled into a
    Shifting womb to
    Seek unjust laws
    And retribution for acts
    We never commit​


    Frolicking
    Through wasted thoughts
    Of a madman’s mind
    Drowning in you
    Own free will​

     
    We are spectacles or our own
    Disastrous Evolution​

    Copyright (C) Angel Campbell​
     
  2. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    your style is self-reflection, mirrored out as social commentary of our distancing origins

    and
    all i can say is wow haha

    are your works published?
     
  3. angel_of_hate

    angel_of_hate Member

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    yes i have 3 books .. "Through An Angels Eye" 3 different volumes, 1 is registered at the Library of Congress and the other 2 will be headed there shortly .. i have many individual poems published in anthologies .. thanx for takin the time to read my work

    angel
     
  4. DiscoPhish

    DiscoPhish Member

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    very poignant, i love how it reflects upon society in a subtle way

    Where lives boundaries
    Know no limit

    that sounds kind of awkward.

    where lives a boundary
    that knows no limit

    just a suggestion?

    keep up the good work, cant wait to read more.
     
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