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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by TiedyeDreams, Jun 22, 2010.

  1. TiedyeDreams

    TiedyeDreams Member

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    she will put aside
    your seething face
    long enough to touch up
    her Spanish
    and lipstick

    don't let that sway
    and that elegant
    bob and tilt
    fool you

    she's just
    one more of
    those awful creatures
    your momma
    told you about

    a hushed voice
    and hiss
    through stained teeth-
    watch out for her, boy

    -written while listening to Strange Face of Love by Tito and Tarantula.
     
  2. Opinionated

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    wonderful! the flow is great and i really love the images this piece conjoures in the mind.
    just great. =)
     
  3. TiedyeDreams

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    Thanks so much! :)
     
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