"Ronald Ray-Gun"

Discussion in 'Writers Forum' started by ThreeEyedChild, Jun 25, 2010.

  1. ThreeEyedChild

    ThreeEyedChild Member

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    A kind of ad lib style of poetry that i do. I make it up as I go along, and slip metaphors in here and there. It's really about the sound of words and the images they make in your head.
    Anyway, enough pretentiousness;


    Pheasant shine, swift of tongue,
    pull the sun out of the sky, and
    the world stays alight through
    artificial.

    Hey diddle, diddle,
    Ripened orbits crescent,
    Continential Incognito,
    that ales the yella' bellied scoundrel!

    The sonata of a thousand lies,
    lies beneath the earth,
    earth-ridden boy,
    boy oh boy.

    Made of plastic and disposable,
    Of yachts and imported cigars,
    and burning notes,
    and architechtural dreams,
    won't buy you acceptance.

    War
    on
    Terror...
    ironic!

    Censorship of fools,
    The kettle's "African American"!

    Red wine, room to swing a hat,
    spill the oil like blood,
    Rage of sea, hearken back,
    Press coverage! Press cover! press on,
    Rift by Drift or How We Came To Be Situated In Such
    A Suburban American Dillusion.

    Hearing a fell tree...
     
  2. Xac

    Xac Visitor

    I don't like this poetry one bit, and I am only commenting to point out that the title "Ronald Ray-Gun", is stolen from Futurama.
     
  3. ThreeEyedChild

    ThreeEyedChild Member

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    Serious? I thought I was the first one to come up with that pun:confused::piggy:
     
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