Happiness

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Dr_Figgles, Feb 12, 2010.

  1. Dr_Figgles

    Dr_Figgles Member

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    Happiness is a fake concept
    All the people say you can achieve happiness
    but they are all just lying
    there is only sadness and pain
    the only thing people do to you is bring you sadness
    There will never be happiness
    Just suffering, pain, and depression
    so live your life but remember this saying
    Happiness can never be achieved because people will bring us all down
    Happiness is a fake concept

    Gary Christison
     
  2. sugarplumplum

    sugarplumplum Member

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    To Dr Figgles, (Gary),

    Happiness and bliss are near sadness and pain. The poets have been writing about this for thousands of years. They DO seem to go hand and hand. But I would rather have happiness, than not, no matter how fleeting the happiness because you can always hold it close to you in your heart. You can remember the people who brought you the happiness.

    No, happiness isn't a "fake concept" as you wrote. Just give yourself time and you will see it change for you. When Shakespeare asked, "Is it better to have loved and lost, than to never have loved at all?"

    The answer has to be yes! You could look at it like, if you loved someone with all your heart, and they died would you have rather never known them? No. Because they will always be with you in your mind and heart. =-)
     
  3. Duck

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    You didn't give much of any illustration as to why your claims are true. There was no flow or rhythm, and no real life of any sort.. it was just a repetitive rant..
     
  4. MokshaMedicine

    MokshaMedicine Banned

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    Like tough break kid. But this was really droneful, and lacking of color. You should at least bring some color to the misery you are in. Happiness isn't a fake concept, you're just a depressed teenager who doesn't understand that you can not hold on to happiness. The more you try to hold on to it the more it will slip away.

    Also some of the best happiness and peace is found on a level dissociated from the people you think are going to bring you down. The only reason they bring you down is because you let them.
     
  5. Dr_Figgles

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    I wrote that when i was "high" i guess on Adderall and i was listening to the gorrillaz that might be the reason why it had no rhythm i mean i really dont know i thought it was okay but rereading the passage or poem whatever you guys wanna call it, it didnt have a flow but it made sense at the time i guess lol.
     
  6. Duck

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    ahaha
     

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