I wish I was drugged up enough to know that you loved me you you you drugged up on you But then that would just be It’s pathetic when I look at you then look away again avoiding avoiding avoiding your avoiding eye Isn’t it equally pathetic when you ignore my civil remarks because you’re dieting me out It’s like people who ware poppies on tv No one really rememberes What they were dieing for British politics It’s bad karma babe -It’s bad karma babe And I believed myself
This made me sad! Can't quite explain why...it seemed random to me, possibly because it's personal, but that did not deter me from enjoying this at all. Great repetition at the beginning...-your avoiding eye- is my favorite and the ending is loverly!
I agree with KittenX; great language here, though I think the "avoiding avoiding avoiding" didn't work as well as the other repetitions you did. I really liked the opening stanza, it set a good tone; didn't say a whole lot but was specific enough to conjure up strong emotions... a great accomplishment! Thanks for sharing this, and looking forward to more!
