Clean Girl

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by inbloom, Mar 24, 2010.

  1. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    This started off as two separate poems, but I liked the way they fit together. It's inspired by lust, and lusting after lust. But in a respectable way. Enjoy.

    I like your light,
    you start off slow to burn.
    I have not known you
    in many moons and suns
    and this dream is not
    mine, anymore.

    Your female glow,
    deposits,
    and dreams of lovers.
    The whole of awe
    surrendered to mothers.

    I cry for wine, and
    wonder of orange skies lit,
    I am just a child.
    Snowy angel to feel,
    screams her charms
    back at us, knows.

    Knows time.

    I see her, a real clean girl
    fine, she don't need much.
    Except some love, sweet,
    but I am dirty.

    Sweet, clean, gypsy child.
    Could I please complete?
    I ain't too neat, and
    my thoughts are worse
    of you, sweet woman.

    Your naked feet,
    the way you sway.
    Lord, child, swing down
    and settle in my way.

    --jacobus '10.
     
  2. OneLifeForm

    OneLifeForm Member

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    I like the last line the best.
     
  3. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    Thanks, man! That's actually my favourite part, too. :D
     
  4. OneChordWonders

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    'and my thoughts are worse'
     

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