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The Words Of Anguish

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by April90, Mar 10, 2010.

  1. April90

    April90 Member

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    Surrounded by my past,
    I have discovered a lot.
    I have discovered at last
    The anguish of loss in my chest.
    This anguish is all that I've got.

    Surrounded by this gloom,
    I only want to break through.
    I only want thoughts to bloom
    Like weeds by a foreigner's tomb.
    He fought for the word, proven true.

    Surrounded by this mist,
    I have apparently drown.
    I have apparently missed
    The time that still runs through my fists.
    My anger could burn it all down...
     
    April90, Mar 10, 2010
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  3. Zorba The Grape

    Zorba The Grape Gavagai?

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    This is pretty good, but I'm thinking it may be more suited as a song. Was that what you intended?
     
    Zorba The Grape, Mar 10, 2010
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