mary jane

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by TheDayTripper, Feb 22, 2010.

  1. TheDayTripper

    TheDayTripper Member

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    Mary Jane has got me on the wall
    and i cant look down im bout to fall
    i look left look right its all the same
    it never quite ceases to amaze
    and i open my eyes and what do i see
    but strange new reality.. oh

    cause mary jane kicked me out of the box
    she shook it around and out i flopped
    and out side this box i must remain
    because its keepin me insane...oh
    cause Mary Jane kicked me out of the box!

    (more like lyrics really)
    (plus im just messin around i dont really care if you like it or not)
    :)
     
  2. Matt12354

    Matt12354 Member

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    Really cool..my favorite line is "Mary jane kicked me out of the box"
     
  3. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    How much time did yo put in to this, honestly now.

    I like. I can totally picture this song in my head.
     
  4. TheDayTripper

    TheDayTripper Member

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    i just started singin at a bus stop one day and out it came... so i wrote it down
     
  5. EnergyofInfinity

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    I dig it!

    It reminds me of right after I smoke, I look around, all is the same, then its like I all of a sudden open my eyes and Im somewhere i've never been before :D
     
  6. Therese Aline

    Therese Aline Slave to the man

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    Diggin' it. :)
     
  7. yagirlnextdoor

    yagirlnextdoor Banned

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  8. Autumn's Angel

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    Wow. this fits my night, right now, exactly! and definitely a great job describing the feeling. Maybe it's the weed, but I totally get it :) I feel much happier outside the box..when I am freed :)
     
  9. Duck

    Duck quack. Lifetime Supporter

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    It started off sounding all anti-drug, and in the end, it just made no sense.
     
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  11. dazedgatsby

    dazedgatsby shitheel

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    I dig it. Is there more to the song or is that all? It's good. :D
     
  12. Autumn's Angel

    Autumn's Angel Member

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    hahahahahaha:)
     
  13. bubbler211

    bubbler211 Member

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    nice rhymes:):)
     
  14. Sugars

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    i liked it :)
     

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