for my cousin, timmy

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by danielleinthesky, Feb 4, 2010.

  1. danielleinthesky

    danielleinthesky Member

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    my cousin had moved in with us and lived with us for a couple months. we got him back on his feet and he decided to go back to metropolis (where he lived before). about a week or two after he left, we got a phone call. he committed suicide /: this is for him.



    holding on to every word
    hellos, goodbyes, and praises
    the memory of you remains
    your hopeful and inspiring phrases
    hidden sadness in your soul
    you never let us see
    the pain that you were feeling
    or your insecurities
    you left appearing happy but i guess you really weren't
    i guess if you could do that, then you must have really hurt
    we miss you and we love you and i had to let you know
    while your body may be gone, your impact will never go
     
  2. drew5147

    drew5147 Dingledodie

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    In Kurt Vonnegut's novel Slaughterhouse-Five, theres these aliens, the Tralfamadorians, that see in all directions of time, so they see one continuous line from someone's brith to their death. They didnt really mourn their dead, because they knew they would always have the time spent with the deceased, and the memories between them. They weren't really gone, just somewhere else in time..

    Good Po-em!
     
  3. OldLodgeSkins

    OldLodgeSkins Member

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    Very nice. You could put this on his gravestone.
     
  4. pinkfloyd666

    pinkfloyd666 Banned Underage!

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    i'm sorry for your loss

    good vibes to you, timmy, and your family
     
  5. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    Very sorry for your loss. Your poem is brimming with all the emotions you're feeling from his death, and I can feel it all just reading it. I nearly cried. Thank you. :)

    And as Drew paraphrased from Kurt Vonnegut, he's not gone. He's just somewhere else in time. Stay strong.
     
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