I wrote a song!

Discussion in 'Random Thoughts' started by ::TheConcreteGirl::, Nov 20, 2004.

  1. ::TheConcreteGirl::

    ::TheConcreteGirl:: Senior Member

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    here are the words..thoughts and feelings?

    hidden words, secret message
    you know just what I mean
    I know you know my every word
    and all that lays between


    Im not fooling when Im telling
    all that you should know.
    I wanna give you every blessing
    what else can I bestow?


    I beat around the bush again
    to make it all shine through
    just read again between the lines
    my secret love letter,to you.


    So here it is im coming clean
    its so hard to just be blunt
    on how you always make me feel
    I always need a front


    so I beat around the bush again
    to make it all shine through
    just read again between the lines
    my secret love letter,to you.


    and I cant hide it
    so why even try it?
    I cant keep it up much longer
    its starting to show
    and here I go
    it just keeps getting stronger


    Im not fooling when Im telling
    all that you should know.
    I wanna give you every blessing
    what else can I bestow?


    I beat around the bush again
    to make it all shine through
    just read again between the lines
    this one goes out to you
     
  2. Epiphany

    Epiphany Copacetic

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  3. LivinNreflection

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    I really liked that, it was good. I really like the flow of it, it caught my attention. Thanks for sharing.
     
  4. Fractual_

    Fractual_ cosmos factory

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    good work! that really was a good piece...i bet a lot of people can relate to it at some point or another, i know i can at least...
     
  5. ::TheConcreteGirl::

    ::TheConcreteGirl:: Senior Member

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  6. ::TheConcreteGirl::

    ::TheConcreteGirl:: Senior Member

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    I love writtingi n all truthfullness..I just cant write music.
     

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