here's a little poem i wrote off of the top of my head

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by pinkfloyd666, Jan 29, 2010.

  1. pinkfloyd666

    pinkfloyd666 Banned Underage!

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    look at that crushed soda can on the side of the road,
    sittin' next to the dead toad
    with a load.....on it's back

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    a little stupid, i wrote it in about 4 seconds

    peace
     
  2. SpacemanSpiff

    SpacemanSpiff Visitor

    not bad...next time try pencil and paper rather than the top of your head :)
     
  3. pinkfloyd666

    pinkfloyd666 Banned Underage!

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    i do alot of pencil and paper, just not this one
     
  4. SpacemanSpiff

    SpacemanSpiff Visitor

    the joke was bad eh
     
  5. danielleinthesky

    danielleinthesky Member

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    haha thats a pretty snazzy poem ya got there :p i'd be interested to see how it went on.
     
  6. pinkfloyd666

    pinkfloyd666 Banned Underage!

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    i'll develop it later
     
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