song i wrote

it's only like a minute long but looking for feedback. a work in progress..

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j6DtbgI2Qks"]YouTube- self medicate (demo)

titled "self medicate"

fixed the link. bare in mind i wrote the lyrics/music in about a minute. i dont really like it, but i never really like anything i write. so i figured i'd expose myself a bit and see what you guys thought of it. don't get to critical as again, i wrote it in a minute. but feedback is well appreciated.

 

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fixed the link

 

I'm listening to it right now and, so far, I like it and can relate to it on quite a few levels.

For example.....I woke up in a very anxious state of mind and immediately took 4mg of xanax. I feel better now.

Good song, man

 

I somewhat like it. Good Job.

 

Thanks guys. I was just feeling shitty last night and literally had a lit cigarette and a bottle of gin. This is what came of it. The lyrics are a little too personal for me, but that's why I'd never decode them for anyone. Glad you liked it.

 

You'd never have to decode them for me, because I'm very well accustomed to self-medicating due to my numerous emotional problems.

 

That's something I was hoping to achieve. Making them vague enough to allow many people to relate. Essentially it's just about self medicating hah.

 

Indeed. The people who know what it's like require no explanation.

 

keep writing man, this can be very therapeutic

bingo