what do you think

Discussion in 'Hippie Wisdom' started by white dove, Mar 29, 2009.

  1. white dove

    white dove Member

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    so here it is i just made it up needs a little work tho

    one love is all i see, people free and happy, peace and warmth for all humanity, its not a plea just what one man can see , vibes are in every thing , some times only faint, but whos to say hes not a saint. The wave will show u the way to behave stay cear free, and let every one see one love is not just you and me, its the cure and the only thing truly pure , peace haha yep im riden the wave


    what do you guys think, any changes welcom
     
  2. Revolver1966

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    that was great man, i was really feeling it!
     
  3. Bluesman36

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    one love was the reason they laughed their ass off ... so I opened the door to my enemy and ask could we wipe the sleet clean but they tell me to please go and fuck my self ... no you just cant win
     
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  6. 52~unknown~52

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    poem or music? either way it's good
     
  7. white dove

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    yeah i dont know what half the things i come up with are, could be both i would say rock on man
     
  8. 52~unknown~52

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    man, you did an awesome job :) i think you got some real talent
     
  9. luzianne

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    That is one cool poem, Thank you for sharing it!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  10. white dove

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    i guesss thank you for reading , have a good one sister
     
  11. pr0ne420

    pr0ne420 Senior Member

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    I think I liiiiive my life in sooooorroooww. Love that song OP.
     
  12. white dove

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    i got a cd to day neail young and it rocks, not sure if i have heard of ur song ,my friend
     
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