Engraved scars and carved feelings

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Adaydreamer, Sep 14, 2009.

  1. Adaydreamer

    Adaydreamer Banned

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    I just found this... I wrote this years ago. It still has so much meaning in my life. I am not a great poet, but writing got me through a lot.



    Love is what she needed

    While she sat there bleeding.

    Her hearts pain pleading

    To escape her self beating.



    Life is her great escape

    But going on is more than she can take.



    There is comfort in creating scars.

    Her friend, Blade, could talk for hours.



    As it carved away her skin

    Her life's spark was growing dim.


    When she then picked up her pen and did not waver.

    Her life still scarred

    But now engraved in paper.
     
  2. MaccaByrd

    MaccaByrd Member

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    I don't know, maybe you are a great poet because that was really good. I thought. :)
     
  3. Adaydreamer

    Adaydreamer Banned

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    Thank you very much! :D
     
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