here's a couple of poems i wrote a little while back... tel me wwhat u think Dream Lost in thought in the dreamland planes, I fly so helpless, alienated from the gate, The gate to consciousness, so far away, Soon the morning rise, not far away, I haven’t much time to return to my form, But when night fall comes back, I’ll see you once more. Lucid Dream I wake up from my close eyed fantasy and expect to find my bed but rather I’m where I was "ah ha!" I open my imagineyes and the smiling sun shines brighter this astral capsul turns to check the landscape just think "up" and taste the cloud, and don’t be scared of coming down its only a dream. This next one is about some of my friends with drinking problems... since then they've made some progress... The duo sits and stares with nothing to say one finds a long object to twirl to pass time the other figits incessantly and is quick to lose his temper boredom, without motivation to deliver oneself is only an invitation to old habits and the transportation arrives and the molecules do their trick false warmth - fun but fake feeling better, now more self aware but still no progress. And the next day the routine resumes, and all that was learned is forgotten... Alcoholic Apathy.
Well done, I enjoyed reading your poetry, this one was my favorite. The format, content and flow all worked together. Thank you.
