Because I'm a Dame

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Therese Aline, Oct 3, 2009.

  1. Therese Aline

    Therese Aline Slave to the man

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    10-01-09

    Because I'm a Dame

    Why is it that I want to write and pen and rhyme I crave
    But cannot find the words with which my feelings to engrave
    Some days it's like a swelling river, others like a receding wave

    Perhaps because I try to suppress and in the process become numb
    But then it swells and overflows and to my emotions I succumb
    Where is the happy medium? I have the problem but not the sum

    What I'm trying to say is I miss my boss with whom I had a great rapport
    But it feels inappropriate to keep in touch or talk to him anymore
    Now it seems I might get his job, and it's because he was such a great mentor

    If I were a boy there would be no impropriety
    As it is, the fault lies in society

    It's not something that can change, taboo
    Implications, though false, his character would imbue
    Because people so easily tend to misconstrue

    What a shame
    For him to be cut out of the frame
    So as not to defame
    And all because I'm a dame


     
  2. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    I had trouble connecting the first and second stanzas with the restk...because I'm a Dame seeemed to change directions very quickly thourgh the work.

    I felt connected to it though. :p
     
  3. Therese Aline

    Therese Aline Slave to the man

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    Yeah, I'm not sure if I should rework it or not. Had a case of writer's block, so I started by addressing the fact that I was having trouble finding the words to say what I wanted to say.
     
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