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None-In-Three

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by April90, Sep 23, 2009.

  1. April90

    April90 Member

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    I press the button and renew
    The page with someone's masterpiece.
    I see a so-called review
    Of letters less than letters missed.
    The comment's author claims to be
    A bard, a critic and a muse.
    This three-in-one, or none-in-three
    Can't get the core of someone's views,
    Of thoughts in their poetic flight.
    Yes, it is hard - they tend to flee,
    But it's the artist's one true might
    To see what other eyes can't see,
    And poets for a day or two,
    Who shape a random phrase by chance,
    Who haven't proved a sentence true,
    Just have no right to set demands
    For those who ponder, dare and speak,
    Who search, discover and create.
    Their fame is yet to reach its peak,
    And as for you, it's way too late.
     
  2. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    Bravo! You really conveyed exactly what you set out to do. I love this theme, so many possibilities.
     
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