Push You Away

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by DR Corncob, Aug 25, 2009.

  1. DR Corncob

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    Let me push you away
    Let me turn you loose
    Let me take our heads out of this noose.

    I want to be free
    Don’t you see I’ve got to get away
    Get away, get away from me.

    When you left I was surprised
    I listened to my heart, I opened my eyes.

    I wanted you bad, I missed you so
    Take me back, don’t ever go.

    My love for you had never died
    It was my pain, my fear I felt inside.

    Your smile, your touch, your lingering glance
    I’m thankful so, for this second chance.

    Your love frees me from my chain
    Your body delicious drives me insane.

    When you left I was surprised
    I listened to my heart, I opened my eyes.

    I promise you this, my vow is true
    I give my heart, my mind and soul to you.

    Walk with me kindly, have no regret
    I’ll comfort you gently, till our last sunset.

    Honoring you will be my goal
    With affection and understanding, our love will grow.

    - Dale
     
  2. scontreras2142

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    one day youll see
    its not love lost
    but love let go
     
  3. MissBHave

    MissBHave insert clever phrase here

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    awesome
     
  4. DR Corncob

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    Did it make you feel like I felt like I lost love?

    It is titled "Push You Away" and it was the fear of losing someone you know is going to go, so you push them away first, then you try to forget about all the bad times and want them back so bad that you will change yourself in ways that you shouldn't have to, just to try and make it work for the sake of love, begging them to just be kind and we could be together, in love, forever.

    I didn't work out but I've got this cool thread! And I'm still looking for that one to love, with happy poems, kisses and foot rubs.
    :D - Dale

    Thanks MissBHave. :D

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    Peace, Love and Family is what my soul searches for,
    it is my body that keeps getting me lost.
     
  5. scontreras2142

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    no it didnt make me think that...

    it made me realize that you are scared of loosing that special someone..

    what i was trying to say that if you really "love" then you can let it go if it needs to be that way. because love is never really lost. not true love
     
  6. DR Corncob

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    Go on, I want to know how I read. I feel the need to be defensive (a tendency) but I would rather hear an intelligent opinion and welcome yours. (it's not a trap) ;) - Dale
     
  7. scontreras2142

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    i guess i kinda see my old self in that poem

    but the state im in now(a step or two ahead) i can realize that loving myself alone is a bit more important than loving another...when both stages are achieved you can let someone go and enjoy the bliss of pain. to me false starts end up in tragic loss but false starts also create new worlds(of inspiration)
     
  8. DR Corncob

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    I'm happy that you can relate to it in your own way. Thanks. :D - Dale
     
  9. happywanderer

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    I think it's great! I can relate to what you project in this poem really!
     
  10. DR Corncob

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    Thank you. - Dale
     

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