Desire

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Therese Aline, Aug 25, 2009.

  1. Therese Aline

    Therese Aline Slave to the man

    Messages:
    1,482
    Likes Received:
    4
    8-24-09

    Desire


    I want to fuck
    Care to try your luck?
    Kiss and suck
    Hips buck

    Eat me out
    Or take a different route
    Use your member stout
    your skills to tout

    Tensions high
    I don’t mind that you’re bi
    In fact, we should give a few things a try
    Now ease those shorts up along your thigh

    Don’t you feel it too?
    You’re a predator, you
    I’d be easy to woo
    If only you’d let it accrue

    This attraction caught me by surprise
    History it defies
    Though it doesn’t feel like a compromise
    And more surprising still the potential for reprise

    So take me up on it. Please?
    We can take it by degrees
    I promise I’m not a tease
    This opportunity is yours to seize

    No strings, no ties
    Just gasps and sighs
    Both our hands on hips and thighs
    Natural highs

    In your eyes I see desire
    Mine reflected, burning fire
    You can’t deny these needs so dire
    So throw yourself upon the pyre
     
  2. scontreras2142

    scontreras2142 Member

    Messages:
    74
    Likes Received:
    0
    i imagine a horny 13 year old boy sitting bored in his english class.

    not very creative.....maybe just not my style
     
  3. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

    Messages:
    4,690
    Likes Received:
    45

    it's as about as technically sound as any other poem here...he just added different words in between the end rhymes that happen to be about fucking.


    I think it's creative in the fact that he steers away from the depressive-a bold thing to do around here.
     
  4. Therese Aline

    Therese Aline Slave to the man

    Messages:
    1,482
    Likes Received:
    4
    I'm a she, rambleON.
     
  5. Greengirl

    Greengirl Senior Member

    Messages:
    6,849
    Likes Received:
    10
    i like it, i really like it. it is bold and erotic. yeah it`s cool ;)
     
  6. Therese Aline

    Therese Aline Slave to the man

    Messages:
    1,482
    Likes Received:
    4
    Thank you, Greengirl. :)
     
  7. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

    Messages:
    4,690
    Likes Received:
    45
    :eek:
     
  1. This site uses cookies to help personalise content, tailor your experience and to keep you logged in if you register.
    By continuing to use this site, you are consenting to our use of cookies.
    Dismiss Notice