Brighter morn

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by marcella312001, Jul 8, 2004.

  1. marcella312001

    marcella312001 Member

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    My mothers weakness made me strong, to face lifes battles all alone.
    My husbands love has filled my sole, and chased away all thoughts of woe.
    I choose to leave my past behind as I stand here on the sands of time. let the future bring what it may, bitter cold, or warmth of day. I'll face them all with a stringth unmatched and walk away without a scratch.
    I will not hange my head and cry saying life has past me by.
    I chose the path on whitch I stand and dare not blame on beast or man any heartach I've endured.
    I know my falts to be my own and strive to reach a brighter morn.
     
  2. strawpuppy

    strawpuppy Member

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    I can really relate to that...

    thanks for sharing it..
     
  3. mebesideme

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    Wow, that is beautiful. I wish I could find a woman like you. I can really relate in a way. I was just hurt by a girl who did all the things to me to you sore you wouldn't. Then she left me for her past, another man who hurt her badly. Why does she still love him? I gave her everything and all the love I had. Sorry, jus thad to vent. You seem to have a beautiful soul. I wish you well in life dear woman who I respect.
     
  4. marcella312001

    marcella312001 Member

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    Thank you very much, your reply touched as much if not more than you say my poem touched you. once again thank you.
     
  5. marcella312001

    marcella312001 Member

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    Hello is anyone out there.:rolleyes:
     
  6. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    You're really craving attention aren't you?
     
  7. marcella312001

    marcella312001 Member

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    no but your rude
     
  8. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Don't be childish. :)
     
  9. marcella312001

    marcella312001 Member

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    LOL I have not been on here in a long while, I see my kids were on last. I gave my daughter my pass word to check things for me back then and I guess she was bored. lol:confused:
     
  10. happywanderer

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    I really like this!
     

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